Ronovan’s Haiku Challenge: Car&Coast

January 10, 2017January 10, 2017 / Tricia Drammeh

I wrote the following haiki sequence in response to RonovanWrites Weekly Haiku Challenge. The challenge words are Car & Coast:

Frigid winds buffet
A car parked along the coast
No one else in sight

Trapped inside, he waits
For ocean waves to claim him
He will cry no more

Please visit Ronovan’s blog to find links to the other participants in the challenge: https://ronovanwrites.wordpress.com/2017/01/09/ronovanwrites-weekly-haiku-poetry-prompt-challenge-131-carcoast/

5 thoughts on “Ronovan’s Haiku Challenge: Car&Coast”

mukhamani

January 11, 2017 at 1:36 am

A sad one and so expressive.

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mukhamani

January 11, 2017 at 1:36 am

I meant the waiting for the end.

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saywhatumean2say

January 12, 2017 at 1:53 am

WoW moving and thought provoking. ~~dru~~

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mariasjostrand

January 23, 2017 at 5:49 pm

I really like how many different ways you can choose to interpret this poem. It can be read as a love poem, a poem about loss and just about a hundred other different things!

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- Tricia Drammeh
  
  January 26, 2017 at 5:48 pm
  
  Thank you, Maria. I love Ronovan’s prompt words. They always inspire me.
  
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